I need my cv updating and freshening up along with a cover letter
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Description
I’m look at future job roles as development chef or excutive Chef for multi sites. Creating, costing and specification of dishes. Can manage big teams and volume of customers
Daniel N.
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Hello Daniel,
I have looked at your CV, I want to give you some weak points what I noticed.
1-Summary
Not powerful summary starting from first pronoun, lack of powerful and strong words, unnecessary details and without your skills and strength.
2-Skill set is not available it is too hard to find your core strengths and potential areas.
3-Job descriptions includes too many paragraphs that make your CV dull. It should be included some highlighted achievements.
4-Too many short sentences and phrases.
5-Wording includes doer statements and monotonous words like;
"Work with "
"My duties included''
Your CV needs to change from doer statements to achiever statements.
Doer statements e.i
"My main roles are to train, guild and support staff in branding along with new trends"
Achiever statement
"Successfully trained, guided and supported staff to achieve the company goals in professional manner "
6-Presentation: you CV is not properly formatted and is visually uneven.
6-Education formatting is not fit for your experience and not properly presented.
7-Second page does not include your name.
8- It should be on 2 pages.
Hi my name is Wasim.
Looking forward to work with you!