Seeking Editor / Proofreading for 2nd Edition Novel

This is the 2nd edition version of my novel. My novel contains 45,927 words in total, 138 pages long, font style Times, and font size 11. My novel genre is romantic fiction and my target audience are women or anyone from the new age spiritual community. This project requires you to sign a None-Disclosure Agreement. I’m seeking the following assistance:

* Critical Reader:

- Analyzing and evaluating the quality, logic, and characters in the story.
- Help identify any contradictions or anything confusing or concepts that needs further explanation, clarity, or improvement.
- Help identify anything that is silly or cliché that might turn off my readers.
- All feedback and opinion should be added in a separate word doc.
- Please be honest with your feedback. Don’t worry about my feelings. As long as you help identify problems with the story, that would be highly appreciated.

* Ghost Writer: You are encouraged to provide suggestion for improvement. In a separate word doc, you can suggest to add more emotions to the story telling or changing the writing style or the way of describing something. Or you can suggest to add something to the story. For example, I have written

“I ride my bike down the street and then I noticed Jenny. I decided to say hi to her.”

However, you would suggestion this better:

“I ride my bike down the street against the cold wind and then I spotted Jenny walking her dog on the side walk. I became hypnotize by the beauty of her fiery red hair fluttering against the wind. My heart starts beating and the coldness I felt dissolves by the blood flowing through my veins.”


* Editor (Please help with determining what paragraph needs indention).

* Proofreader

This is the theme of the story:

Dive deep into a poetic love story that is thought-provoking and mind-blowing. Prepare for an unforgettable emotional rollercoaster ride that will change the way you see this world. Follow John and Kelly’s breathtaking romance that bends the bounders of time and space. Witness John’s friendship with Alexander Buckingham that would make you question your physical reality. My Eternal Love by Gus Mendoza explores profound themes such as spiritual awakening, soulmates, reincarnation, poetry, and living in the struggle. This story is more than just a simple love story. This story is about digging through the rabbit hole, seeking the truth, and finding your true authentic self. If this book has found you, then it’s a story that you must read.