Research assistant for correction of a scientific article

I am looking for an scientific research assistant to correct a scientific article before publication in an international medical journal.

I am a sexologist in France and I carried out a qualitative observational study entitled "Doctors talking about sexuality: what are the patients’ feelings?".
I wish to publish this study in the medical journal "Sexual Medicine" (https://www.smoa.jsexmed.org).
The study is over, the article is written, and I submitted it to the newspaper.
I had very encouraging feedback, but the proofreading committee asked me to make some modifications, for which I will need an assistant because in the current situation I unfortunately do not have enough time to m take care of it properly.
The modifications to be made concern:
- the grammatical style which generally requires to be corrected and to be revised in better English
- to delete some tables which according to the reviewers are too numerous, to combine certain answers
- reduce the size of the article a little by removing redundant passages or those that are not essential

So that you can get an idea of ​​the work to be done, I am attaching the article I submitted as well as the reviewers' response with the precise list of modifications to be made.

All you have to do is make all the changes for the manuscript to be published.

For this work, I need a person who is fluent in medical English, and who is used to writing scientific articles in English (I am not looking for literary English: scientific articles are written in simple English. , perfectly grammatically and syntactically correct, which does not beat around the bush and goes to the essentials so that it is easily understandable, with short and precise sentences. possible.)

If you speak French and the exchanges can be done in French, this is an asset, even if it is not compulsory. In this case, if you are comfortable with French, you can answer me in French, that will be a plus.

To apply, please :
- Tell me why you think you are the best candidate for this job
- if you are comfortable with French, write your application in French (otherwise in English)
- To show me that you know what scientific research is all about, write me which prefered MESH labels you could use to search articles about the effects of neuroleptics in pregnant women and where to find these keywords
- Tell me how many hours you are available on average per week, and how long do you think it will take you to do this work
- Give me your best hour price (I'm on a budget here !)