- Proofreading my children's fantasy book

Hope this message finds you in good spirits!

I've embarked on a new creative journey and just wrapped up my first children's fantasy book. Since English isn't my first language, I've been toying with the idea of getting it professionally proofread.

I've had some close trusted friends (all native English speakers) take a look, and they've given it a big thumbs up. Their positive feedback has fired me up to make this book the best it can be.

If this book takes off, there are more stories brewing in my mind. It'd be fantastic to have a consistent partner to collaborate with on this journey. If this sounds intriguing to you, maybe we could have a chat? I'm sure it'd be a great way for us to align our visions.

The book is currently around 14,000 words. Simplifying my language while retaining the essence was challenging, but I believe I've come close to what I envisioned. I'd love for you to read it and perhaps help me determine the ideal age group for it. While I've penned it with children in mind, I genuinely hope readers of all ages can enjoy it.

I'm eager to hear your thoughts and potentially collaborate.

Warm regards,

Elie