Proof read Landing sales page

Proof read Landing sales page for selling a new eLearning course bundle: The 6 Domains of Health -

https://6d-of-health.teachable.com/p/https-6d-of-health-teachable-com-salespage

I require a seasoned freelance web content editor to proofread and refine the copy on my startup's new landing webpage. The page aims to clearly explain our value proposition and product offerings to attract potential customers. As a solo founder working long hours, I do not have the bandwidth to devote multiple rounds to polishing the text. I need your expert eye to thoroughly check the copy for typos, grammatical errors, inconsistencies and awkward phrasing. The language must be crisp, concise yet compelling. Given landing pages often represent a company's first impression, the quality of writing is paramount. Beyond copy editing, I welcome your ideas on restructuring certain passages for increased clarity and calls-to-action. Additionally, please evaluate the overall tone - it must strike the right balance of being informative, persuasive and engaging. Once edited, I request a submission with track changes and comments so I may review the revisions. A strong grasp of web copywriting best practices is essential. Most important is that the page ultimately motivates visitors to learn more about our solutions. With your proven skills sharpening online content, I trust you can refine my messaging to clearly resonate with target customers. Do let me know in your proposal how you will approach this work, your relevant qualifications and estimated timeline to complete the review. I look forward to reviewing your suggestions to take this page to the next level.