Need help with proofreading childrens book

An experienced editor is sought to proofread and provide feedback on an unpublished children's book manuscript. The story aims to foster empathy and friendship in young readers through colorful characters demonstrating kindness and compassion. Currently in draft form, the narrative follows a short, simple structure using age-appropriate vocabulary and illustrations to engage 6-7 year olds. Feedback is requested on language, tone, construction and whether the messages and overall flow captivate readers. Guidance is needed to refine the narrative, confirming the appropriate description conveys the intended messages while maintaining a logical sequence from beginning to end. Suggestions for expansion or trimming of certain areas will also help strengthen the book for its intended audience.