3 Children books for 3-7yrs to be ghost written for a children's entertainment compan

Topic: Captain Fantastic
Tone: Humorous
Extra notes: Hi There,

I run a children's entertainment company and want to sell merchandise. I would like a little 3 series book collection we could hand to the birthday child and sell to the others.

I've had a go myself please see attached but think there is room for improvement.

The stories have to be clear who 'Captain Fantastic' is, doesn't need to rhyme or have a big moral (but that is nice) - need to be very marketable so someone with experiences is a must.

I would like to have all rights to the books and use my name on them so a ghost writer is what I need.

Let me know you thoughts?

Thanks,
Tommy