Provide opinions and suggestions on poetry collection for publishing.

I have written a number of poems over the last few months and I'm strongly considering publishing a book collecting them all together.

Before I do that, I would like to gather opinions on whether the work is publishable and likely to be profitable.

The deliverable for this project would be a one page summary of your opinions of the work and any initial suggestions you may have for improving it.

There are two areas I would like to focus on to start with. I believe my selection may have been too broad and my ordering of the poems may leave something to be desired. Of course, all criticism will be welcomed and considered.

If I do decide to take this forward, there will be further editing work available to help me make sure the finished project is as polished and appealing as possible.

A sample of the style is attached.