Proof and edit pitch deck copy

I am launching a business consultancy for the legal cannabis industry (medical, CBD and hemp) with a few partners. I've put together a deck with 9 slides (3-4 points per slide) which is effectively our sales pitch, and will form the content for a simple one pager website (attached). Please ignore the rubbish formatting/image quality - a designer will sort all that stuff

I've written the copy which we've agreed conveys the right info and sentiment - can you help polish it up so that it's concise, consistent, clear, and non-repetitive? And if you can rephrase or add more compelling language, that would be great

Am hoping this is more of an edit job for you, but do let me know what you think and a quote

Thanks