Business event Proposal to Pitch and win grant which involves inclusive of community
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The reason that they have given me is:
The Evaluation Panel has indicated that the project does not adequately satisfy the following evaluation considerations:
- Raise awareness of shared values / Singapore spirit
- Active engagement of the community
- Strengthen values, attitudes or norms to make a positive social impact
The panel suggest:
the main aim of the project was more about engaging youths and developing a particular genre of music in the local music scene, without any particular relevance to Singapore identity or values, or intentionally bringing together specific groups of people across divides. Perhaps for future projects, you might want to more clearly detail what plans there are to bring together specific groups in the community to work together and having specific plans or methods to facilitate better understanding and empathy of each other.
I hope that helps, as I have the proposal with me you to add on or for you to redraft all over again.
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Austin P.05 Jan 2020HI I got a proposal for grant being rejected by a government stat board.
The reason that they have given me is:
The Evaluation Panel has indicated that the project does not adequately satisfy the following evaluation considerations:
- Raise awareness of shared values / Singapore spirit
- Active engagement of the community
- Strengthen values, attitudes or norms to make a positive social impact
The panel suggest:
the main aim of the project was more about engaging youths and developing a particular genre of music in the local music scene, without any particular relevance to Singapore identity or values, or intentionally bringing together specific groups of people across divides. Perhaps for future projects, you might want to more clearly detail what plans there are to bring together specific groups in the community to work together and having specific plans or methods to facilitate better understanding and empathy of each other.
I hope that helps, as I have the proposal with me you to add on or for you to redraft all over again.
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Austin P.05 Jan 2020HI I got a proposal for grant being rejected by a government stat board.
The reason that they have given me is:
The Evaluation Panel has indicated that the project does not adequately satisfy the following evaluation considerations:
- Raise awareness of shared values / Singapore spirit
- Active engagement of the community
- Strengthen values, attitudes or norms to make a positive social impact
The panel suggest:
the main aim of the project was more about engaging youths and developing a particular genre of music in the local music scene, without any particular relevance to Singapore identity or values, or intentionally bringing together specific groups of people across divides. Perhaps for future projects, you might want to more clearly detail what plans there are to bring together specific groups in the community to work together and having specific plans or methods to facilitate better understanding and empathy of each other.
I hope that helps, as I have the proposal with me you to add on or for you to redraft all over again. -
Is this about how to structure the business, such as legal form?