1 line of text for each of 4 slides on website/home page slider
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It is about small web design company website. They want to offer their service for fresh entrepreneurs mainly.
There is a slider on home page and I just need one line of text for each of 4 slides - as it is now but better.
4 slides are attached and you can find my texts on it, so you can have the idea. What I need to be done is:
1. To make these 4 lines of texts sound/read better (and correct in English), smarter, a bit heart-warming but not pathetic, not pretentious, not cheesy, banal etc. Perhaps it is possible to take this whole idea to the higher level?
2. As you can see on attachments the first part of each sentence stays bold and uppercase. We need to keep it that way and even if you read just the uppercase parts in order, they still make sense and say something nice.
Please note that each sentence is connected with photo in the background and it needs to stay like that.
Please ask me if there is something not clear.
Tadek W.
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Would it be possible to find out more about the company?
- what are its key messages?
- could you expand on what they do? You mention it is a web design company aimed at small start ups etc. but how do their services relate to lines 3 & 4?
Thanks
SamTadek W.11 Mar 2018Hi Sam,
I think that the key message is they want help fresh entrepreneurs, businesses to grow - successful and safe, they want to make them comfortable as doing business is not easy thing, they want to take a care of their image and internet-related needs - from the start, when the fresh entrepreneur just needs the basics - the logo and website or if it's an ecommerce website, then they will teach him how to cope with it and they will assist him as long as he needs. Later, if the business wants to step further - ie. buy some internet campaign it can be managed too, if he needs print or digital mail marketing - it can be done... etc.
... and here is about the line no. 3 - there are moments when the entrepreneur sometimes wants to give up, can feel overwhelmed or can have some doubts or does't know how to cope with something, how these internet things work or just needs extra power... and there they are for him, a year or two after the logo has been created or the website has been designed, so they all together can win again, and/or - there is the line no. 4: the business is big, solid and confident, they still can work for the entrepreneur because there is the future and everything around has changed and there are new challenges, needs and expectations - especially in this digital world and they are still there for him. There is the next river to cross - I.e. a mobile application is necessary and they want to work for for him as they know each other very well. They have seen this before and know very well how to help...
This is how see this story and hope it can help.Sam D.11 Mar 2018Thanks for the info.