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Writing proposal for Business idea
- by Riad D.
- Posted: 4 Mar 2015
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Riad D.
London, GB
I am very disappointed for the proposal I received. I have found 90% of text copied from other sources and pasted as is without any even changing the headings or paraphrasing. The worst thing was those material are completely irrelevant to my business idea. Furthermore, the sections that I was asked to send inputs for them (such as pricing), I found that they were just copied and pasted without checking the grammar or the words.
For exmaple, SWOT analysis comptletly copied from this source
http://www.oracle.com/us/corporate/analystreports/ovum-assessment-webcenter-sites-2133185.pdf
The problem are those SWOT are completely irrelevant to my case. The analysis provided by Ovum have been conducted on an already established company while my business is still not exist.
A second example is this document
file:///C:/Users/admin/Downloads/post-pn-460.pdf
Please find my comments in the attached document which highlights the text and from where it was copied.
This is attitude is not acceptable in business. We don't have the right to talk other's people work. If sdon't know and familiar in the domain then you just tell me. Now, my money have been spent for nothing and my times is wasted.
I was in rush when I released the £ 85. I released them when I was just read the first two pages and I wasn't expected all the document has the same problem.
My requirements are very clear. It is only required to write 2/3 pages that presents the proposal elements in concise and states to the point and further I asked Meri to have a conference call to explain the idea before she started writing to make sure everything is OK but unfortunately she didn't listen to me.
For these reasons I would like to request for a complete refund.
RiadMeri W.
I am sorry you were not happy with my work. As a gesture of goodwill I had already reduced the cost by more than half which you agreed to and paid. I think language barriers and a misunderstanding on your part of your original brief were also factors in this. I can assure you that I worked very hard on your proposal and your claims above are simply not true. I have informed PPH about the fact you are unhappy and did so from the very start. This is the first bad review I have had, all the others below have been very happy with my work.
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