Proofread and enhance an apology letter
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Experience Level: Expert
Estimated project duration: less than 1 week
The person i write to is a 'friend' that we used to date (for a month) but i said something wrong a month ago. im writing him a letter to win him back. im looking for someone who lives in the UK has experience dating guys. If you're someone kind, patient and sweet, please send me a proposal. Only 600 words. I'd like to keep it short and sweet. But i need you to enhance it so i get a better chance of winning him back. i would like to have a draft on Saturday and second draft on Monday and the final on Wednesday.
I have taken the gender preference off the list. I'm happy to meet near Oxford Street, London, if you want to get a better idea of who I am. Or I can provide my number to talk on the phone. i want to make him feel better and talk to me. currently does want to. i called him weak, and dug up the old wound he had when no one wanted to play badminton with him. i know im terrible.
Below is what I have written so far.
Hey Jean,
I hope you're well. Thanks for giving me this chance. I wanted to apologise for what I said on 1st August via WhatsApp.
What I said was horribly inappropriate, disrespectful, and wildly selfish. We are supposed to be friends and all about supporting and caring for each other. By judging your ability in badminton and making a comparison to what I did, I tried to prove how much I cared about you but I crossed the line. I was too scared to lose you, which stemmed from my low self-esteem and loneliness during my childhood. Also, I think I wanted to tell you that I was stronger and had more power in this relationship, and that was not good.
My words not only ruined your confidence in this relationship and the trust in me but also caused psychological trauma. I hope you know that that was never my intention.
So many times I tried to stop myself thinking and contacting you, but as soon as I pick up a tooth flosser, the image of you flossing with blood in your mouth staring at the mirror in the bathroom fascinates me.
I wanted you to be able to look back on this time and see only happy and sexy moments, but I have ruined that with my inner insecurity. I've brought bad memories to your life instead of happiness. While I can't truly know how this feels to you, I can certainly understand that what I did was one of the worst things I could possibly have done to you, Jean. I really regret that.
That was an especially disgusting thing for me to have done to you after how sweet you have treated me from day one. You have not only shown your incredible, beautiful soul, but you have also shown me support and kindness that I could never have possibly expected. To hurt you in this way was an insult to all the things that you have done for me and I hate myself for that.
I've found explanations for what I did, but there are no excuses. I made poor choices, regardless of my intention. I entirely take responsibility for my actions and the terrible damage I have caused you.
However, I know you deserve more than a 'sorry'. And I know you like badminton, so I want to take you to somewhere in Europe where they have great badminton environment. We could find some clubs and play the whole weekend there if you want. I have a few places in mind and Denmark is one of them. Or, I can take you to Cornwall to eat crabs or what not, before or after your birthday. If you would rather not do these, that's fine: I want to find some way to make up what I did and hopefully heal your wound as much as possible.
Today is two months exactly since we met on 25th June. I cannot deny that I have feelings for you, no matter how things go. I'm only human. And I don't think we should set rules for our feelings. It's all that we live for. I can’t expect your forgiveness, though I certainly hope for it. All I can say is that I genuinely want things to be okay between us. I want you to feel okay and eventually even happy when you're around me. I want to earn back the wonderful relationship that we had. Hopefully, in the future, we can find a way to move past this and create happier times together.
I sincerely thank you for hearing me out, and I hope I can work to make it right.
Ethan
I have taken the gender preference off the list. I'm happy to meet near Oxford Street, London, if you want to get a better idea of who I am. Or I can provide my number to talk on the phone. i want to make him feel better and talk to me. currently does want to. i called him weak, and dug up the old wound he had when no one wanted to play badminton with him. i know im terrible.
Below is what I have written so far.
Hey Jean,
I hope you're well. Thanks for giving me this chance. I wanted to apologise for what I said on 1st August via WhatsApp.
What I said was horribly inappropriate, disrespectful, and wildly selfish. We are supposed to be friends and all about supporting and caring for each other. By judging your ability in badminton and making a comparison to what I did, I tried to prove how much I cared about you but I crossed the line. I was too scared to lose you, which stemmed from my low self-esteem and loneliness during my childhood. Also, I think I wanted to tell you that I was stronger and had more power in this relationship, and that was not good.
My words not only ruined your confidence in this relationship and the trust in me but also caused psychological trauma. I hope you know that that was never my intention.
So many times I tried to stop myself thinking and contacting you, but as soon as I pick up a tooth flosser, the image of you flossing with blood in your mouth staring at the mirror in the bathroom fascinates me.
I wanted you to be able to look back on this time and see only happy and sexy moments, but I have ruined that with my inner insecurity. I've brought bad memories to your life instead of happiness. While I can't truly know how this feels to you, I can certainly understand that what I did was one of the worst things I could possibly have done to you, Jean. I really regret that.
That was an especially disgusting thing for me to have done to you after how sweet you have treated me from day one. You have not only shown your incredible, beautiful soul, but you have also shown me support and kindness that I could never have possibly expected. To hurt you in this way was an insult to all the things that you have done for me and I hate myself for that.
I've found explanations for what I did, but there are no excuses. I made poor choices, regardless of my intention. I entirely take responsibility for my actions and the terrible damage I have caused you.
However, I know you deserve more than a 'sorry'. And I know you like badminton, so I want to take you to somewhere in Europe where they have great badminton environment. We could find some clubs and play the whole weekend there if you want. I have a few places in mind and Denmark is one of them. Or, I can take you to Cornwall to eat crabs or what not, before or after your birthday. If you would rather not do these, that's fine: I want to find some way to make up what I did and hopefully heal your wound as much as possible.
Today is two months exactly since we met on 25th June. I cannot deny that I have feelings for you, no matter how things go. I'm only human. And I don't think we should set rules for our feelings. It's all that we live for. I can’t expect your forgiveness, though I certainly hope for it. All I can say is that I genuinely want things to be okay between us. I want you to feel okay and eventually even happy when you're around me. I want to earn back the wonderful relationship that we had. Hopefully, in the future, we can find a way to move past this and create happier times together.
I sincerely thank you for hearing me out, and I hope I can work to make it right.
Ethan
Ethan L.
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