Proofreading and rewrite ups on my report for my internship research
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Hi, I need a proofreading and rewrites on my report. It's a little bit disastrous and I was wondering if you can help me!
Here is what I need the most:
-Developing better arguments with supporting claims (most important)
-Thesis that engages the reader
-Better organization
-Cohesion (better transition from each paragraphs)
Here is a basic overview what I am trying to do:
I am trying to develop an argument against Economists who believe that the United States should not cut spending on foreign aids on Sub-Saharan Africa. I am trying to list different ideas that can potentially solve the problems and convince the Economists that the United States should still help out the poor countries.
But, I feel like I am putting too much informations of different ideas without making coherent, nuanced and focused argument to convince the Economists. I would appreciate any help that you can assist me in making it better!
Thanks!
Here is what I need the most:
-Developing better arguments with supporting claims (most important)
-Thesis that engages the reader
-Better organization
-Cohesion (better transition from each paragraphs)
Here is a basic overview what I am trying to do:
I am trying to develop an argument against Economists who believe that the United States should not cut spending on foreign aids on Sub-Saharan Africa. I am trying to list different ideas that can potentially solve the problems and convince the Economists that the United States should still help out the poor countries.
But, I feel like I am putting too much informations of different ideas without making coherent, nuanced and focused argument to convince the Economists. I would appreciate any help that you can assist me in making it better!
Thanks!
Tae O.
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Hi Tae
Happy to help! What is the word length?Tae O.10 Jun 2018Its 1500 words
Leon P.10 Jun 2018Hi
You have now posted an 1800 word job on exactly the same topic - is it the same job? -
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Tae O.10 Jun 2018Up to 50 dollars
Kristi C.10 Jun 2018You have also posted this job twice... why is that?
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