I need my fictional book to be proofread and improved

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Experience Level: Intermediate
Estimated project duration: 1 - 6 months
Open to higher proposals DOE.

Ideally looking for someone who has a background in English literature such as a degree or has worked on fictional books in the past. Some proof to backup your skills as it is hard to find someone who is fit for the job.

Num. of words: 11127

Industry: Entertainment

Topic: Blue Karma - Drama Adventure

Tone: Objective/Impersonal

Extensive research needed: yes

General Overview:
I am about a third way through my book now. As from a technical background I am used to factual writing. I want the words to flow well, give the reader a sense of involvement, make the characters come out a bit more, make the settings of the story feel real with the use of similies, metaphors. The story to have more depth and the character dialogue more interesting as I feel it can be dull at times.

1) I want these words to be proofread. Any information that you feel is missing in the passage should be added in and highlighted so I know it is new.

2) I want an overhaul of the English language (e.g. more suited words)

3) Keep in close contact as you progress through the manuscript. Make suggestions with me. Such as better, more fitting scenarios. More adapted conversations. Like sending a document of improvements.

Final Deliverable:
An edited manuscript that flows well and meets all the above.

Five stars will go to someone who meets all 3 Responsibilities consistently.

More Information:
I am happy to provide any information throughout the process the story, characters and their history, plot, sub plots.

This book is actually being put into an adventure game. The book is being created so that I can structure the whole game and I also plan to sell the book where you will get a mention for your involvement.

The game will be a point and touch game for the App and Play store, also on a web based application.

Please no time wasters.
Any more information get in touch :)

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