Sales Letters / copy block of 10
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£151(approx. $189)
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Experience Level: Expert
I'm a designer / small digital/litho printers who needs fresh ideas, I'm surrounded by yes-men
I have a Block of ten copywriting jobs to be done over the next couple of weeks the one below is probaby the largest and is for a leaflet and a website. There are also follow on letters to devise, sales pitches, delivery pitches, 2 websites and all sorts of stuff that needs doing... well, forever!
Can you send me some copy so I can see your creative/selling skills? As a newbie on PPH I am seriously struggling trying to figure out what the heck I'm doing and if the first job isn't very good, the next nine jobs will be the same. Any questions? Have I messed up the advert again?
Cheers Mike
MY ORIGINAL ADVERT.....
I need to sell an advertising-product / service to sole traders and builders, hairdressers etc. the suggested basic idea is below but, I’m not a copywriter So this is the best I can do can you help please?
COPY..............................
IF I GET YOU 100 NEW CUSTOMERS WILL YOU PAY ME 10% COMMISSION?
I’m betting you would and, and if I could trust you to pay me, I would sell for you immediately, unfortunately, I can’t think of a way to monitor your sales and my commission so it’s probably not viable - unless you can think of a way forward? Meanwhile, here’s an alternative route for me to generate new sales leads for you...
SALES LEAD GENERATION
My own business XXX Design & Print, every few weeks generates new sales by sending out 10,000 A4 leaflets which incorporate many of my customers business cards. This simple leaflet generates remarkable trade for me by promoting our loss-leader, the humble business card at just £33 for 500, and guess what? it also generates NEW ENQUIRIES AND SALES for the businesses which are displayed on it!
Click on the link for a full size copy and you’ll see what I mean, it’s a simple yet powerful lead generator (link fails… please call for an unlock code or email address capture)
SAVE 50% ON MY USUAL COMMISSION
If you think your business card should be on my leaflet for the next 10,000 local homes then, call me personally and place your order today, it’s just £99 for newcomers, - that’s half price - but be warned, once you’ve seen what business you can get, you’ll be begging to pay double the price… and I’ll let you! Make sure you have your credit card handy when you call, it’s first come first served and only one of each trade.
FREE If your business card isn’t as ‘pretty’ as it could be, then we’ll redesign it FOC!
NO RUSH
If your business card isn’t in the next issue, don’t panic, watch out for our next leaflet coming through your letterbox over the next few weeks and keep it in the kitchen draw because the number of local cards on it make it a great reference tool to keep, and of course our details are also there for when you’re ready. Let’s hope your main competitor isn’t.
PS. When was the last time you looked a gift horse in the mouth?
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Mike - If you were to post (say)
ten similar jobs as a block, with a budget of (say) £150 then the commission would be on a single 150 invoice (they charge at 10% with a minimum charge of £15. That's why it is difficult to respond to a small job. Hope that helps. C.M.
I have a Block of ten copywriting jobs to be done over the next couple of weeks the one below is probaby the largest and is for a leaflet and a website. There are also follow on letters to devise, sales pitches, delivery pitches, 2 websites and all sorts of stuff that needs doing... well, forever!
Can you send me some copy so I can see your creative/selling skills? As a newbie on PPH I am seriously struggling trying to figure out what the heck I'm doing and if the first job isn't very good, the next nine jobs will be the same. Any questions? Have I messed up the advert again?
Cheers Mike
MY ORIGINAL ADVERT.....
I need to sell an advertising-product / service to sole traders and builders, hairdressers etc. the suggested basic idea is below but, I’m not a copywriter So this is the best I can do can you help please?
COPY..............................
IF I GET YOU 100 NEW CUSTOMERS WILL YOU PAY ME 10% COMMISSION?
I’m betting you would and, and if I could trust you to pay me, I would sell for you immediately, unfortunately, I can’t think of a way to monitor your sales and my commission so it’s probably not viable - unless you can think of a way forward? Meanwhile, here’s an alternative route for me to generate new sales leads for you...
SALES LEAD GENERATION
My own business XXX Design & Print, every few weeks generates new sales by sending out 10,000 A4 leaflets which incorporate many of my customers business cards. This simple leaflet generates remarkable trade for me by promoting our loss-leader, the humble business card at just £33 for 500, and guess what? it also generates NEW ENQUIRIES AND SALES for the businesses which are displayed on it!
Click on the link for a full size copy and you’ll see what I mean, it’s a simple yet powerful lead generator (link fails… please call for an unlock code or email address capture)
SAVE 50% ON MY USUAL COMMISSION
If you think your business card should be on my leaflet for the next 10,000 local homes then, call me personally and place your order today, it’s just £99 for newcomers, - that’s half price - but be warned, once you’ve seen what business you can get, you’ll be begging to pay double the price… and I’ll let you! Make sure you have your credit card handy when you call, it’s first come first served and only one of each trade.
FREE If your business card isn’t as ‘pretty’ as it could be, then we’ll redesign it FOC!
NO RUSH
If your business card isn’t in the next issue, don’t panic, watch out for our next leaflet coming through your letterbox over the next few weeks and keep it in the kitchen draw because the number of local cards on it make it a great reference tool to keep, and of course our details are also there for when you’re ready. Let’s hope your main competitor isn’t.
PS. When was the last time you looked a gift horse in the mouth?
........................
Mike - If you were to post (say)
ten similar jobs as a block, with a budget of (say) £150 then the commission would be on a single 150 invoice (they charge at 10% with a minimum charge of £15. That's why it is difficult to respond to a small job. Hope that helps. C.M.
Mike F.
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