Proofreading and Rewriting

Hi,

I have 2 sales pages and a tutorial about landing page creation, all written in English. But as my Englis is pretty far to be perfect, my texts probably doesn't "sound" NATURAL in English and surelly are full of mistakes. So, I need a PROOFREADING to get my texts to sound natural English and without grammar mistakes. But any suggestion is welcommed that helpes they to sound more professional as well.

Furthermore I need my third sales page finished.
As you can see I already started writing it, and you will find several ideas and thoughts, which can help you make it effective. I'd like the lenght of this sales page to be around 1000-1200, maybe up to 1500 words.
I'd like it to be in a style similar to the "Are Your Ready For Success?" sales page. For example you can start with a short story (of about up to 500, or just 120-200 words) to PREPARE A STRONGER IMPACT for the second part, the SFI review. Actually you don't need to write a "story" for the introduction, you can write whatever you want, but it must be something that will urge the reader to keep reading with interest, and which makes perfect sense with the rest of the text. If you find my introduction good enough, then keep it with the changes you think proper to make it more effective.
As you can see in the "Are Your Ready For Success?" sales page, in the introduction I prepare the reader to make him understand how important is to build a list if he wants to make money online, then, in the review part I present him a business that provides the best marketing tools for building a list. Furthermore in the introduction I give the reader several reasons why he should choose my offer instead of other providers (regarding the quality, reliability, price etc.). I'd like something similar in the SFI sales page.
You should start in a depressing mood, then the review part should be more and more enticing, and the finish very enticing, but WITHOUT HYPES AND LIES.

The text of the tutorial is attached, is a 3 pages MS Word document, you can download it.
The links of the sales pages are:

TubeLaunch Review:
http://newbiesuccess.siterubix.com/tlr

Are You Ready For Success:
http://newbiesuccess.siterubix.com/12scr

SFI - Strong Future International:
http://newbiesuccess.siterubix.com/sfir

So, you have around 3600 words text for proofreading and a sales page to rewrite, to make it more concise and logical, and to look and sound professional.

Thank's,
Best Regards,
Laszlo Kolumban