Proof read and improve email sequence

Hello,

I run a service called Hot Fishin' that helps fishing competition orgasniers in the UK promote and score their matches. It's been going for a few years and has a very active community.

There are many users (fishing completion organisers) who have signed up over the past 12 months but not yet regularly using the service. I have written an email sequence of 11 short messages to try and engage these users by talking about various aspects of the tool that will hopefully help them re-engage.

I have written the emails but I am s**t at writing so looking for someone to help me improve every aspect of them. I want to keep the style friendly and as if it was coming from me direct to the reader.

As I say there are 11 short emails all of pretty similar length. An example of one is below as sure that will be helpful to know.

I have put a budget below but feel free to adjust as I have no idea how much time this would take. If this works out I am also looking for help with my website copy and another email sequence.

Thanks,

John

Subject: Do you run leagues?

Hi Steve,

Fishing leagues are the main reason people use Hot Fishin; because once they are set up all the scoring and calculation are done for you saving you so much time and hassle working out points and weights. The league tables are then totally transparent for all the anglers each week and it keep everything in one place. If you wanted to see some examples check out these individual leagues, pairs leagues and team leagues.

I have made a short video here on setting them up if that is useful

Cheers mate

John