Proof and check structure of 2 x 500 word bid responses

Need proofing and checking the logical, cohesive structure of two UK public sector bid responses relating to social value. The response has already gone through Grammarly, so the expectation is that the freelancer is able to add value to the structure of the response, and highlight any gaps in the content of the response using the following logic: the content needs to show evidence of where we have done what we say, where possible costs or value, and the results of what we do.

The responses needs to be marked up using tracked changes in word.