I need someone to proofread and analyze my first blog post

I'm looking for someone to not only proofread and edit my blog post, but to also analyze to see if my opinion is clear. In other words, has my position on the topic been clearly established? Does it need a stronger support base?

I will provide the rough draft of my post, in word form so one can easily edit it and write in their comments.

***The ideas I have in this article may come off as offensive or politically incorrect, so please only accept if you have an open mind and are able to tolerate such material***