I need a research report reviewed.

Hi all,

I need a good research report writer that can read a 24-paged report (containing more images than text, see attachment below) about security information and event management then critically point out what may be lacking in the report and how it can be improved. I expect the writer to send me detailed comments regarding areas in which the report can be improved. You can send your input as a new document or simply write directly below the original text. 

The length of your comment doesn't matter, it could be half a page or even less, but definitely more than a few sentences because you need to provide in-depth details regarding your suggestions.

Please note that I do not have the original data from the study so you must work with only the information contained in the report I attached below. I cannot provide additional information outside that.

Looking forward to hearing from interested parties.
Best regards,