Critical Reader and Story Evaluation (2nd Edition Novel)

* Critical Reader:

- On a separate sheet of paper, provide all your feedback analysis.
 
- Provide the page number and copy and paste whatever paragraph that needs to be highlighted to explain what’s wrong or what needs to improve.
 
- Please help in identifying anything that you might think is a turnoff for my readers, such as anything that is cliché, silly, wrong in regard to facts, any contradictions, or anything that doesn’t make logical sense.
 
- Provide suggestions and examples of how the writing style can be improved and how to add more emotional expression to the characters or situation.
 
- On page 29, I summarized the whole dating experience between John and Kelly in one paragraph. I ran out of ideas when it comes to what happened between John and Kelly in the summer of 2006. You are welcome to throw in some ideas for me. If your ideas are good and relevant to the story’s theme, then I would definitely add them to the story.
 
- Please be honest with your feedback. Don’t worry about hurting my feelings. If you help identify anything that is wrong, that would be very appreciated.

- Do not copy-past my whole novel into an AI software tool. Try to analyze the story without AI tool.