Short Story Childrens Book

I need a short story creating for a children's book.

It will be a tale of little "Tianna's dreamy trip to Jamaica"

Tianna has never been on holiday abroad, she was a very ill little girl.

She lives in hospital and hasn't seen much of the world.

But for her 7th birthday her wish was about to come true.

For it would be her very first time on an aeroplane, to a land filled of beautiful beaches and sensational skies of blue.

Nurse Keeley had just been to say goodnight and help Tianna take her meds.

"Now go to sleep Tianna" she said, "it's late and time for bed".

But little did she know, Tianna had other plans instead....

She said goodnight to Nurse Keeley, and closed her eyes with the pretence. Now that everyone was sleeping, Tianna's trip to Jamaica would commence.

She retreieved her bag from under her bed, and left a goodbye card.

It read..."I've gone to jamaica Nurse Keeley and Dr May, it's time for my first holiday. I have a flight to catch, so must leave without delay."

"Please don't worry, everything's packed. I've remembered to take, my medication, pjarmas and some wonderful snacks.

"All aboard flight 678". "Your flight is shortly departing, please produce your passport at the gate, your dream holiday is about to get started".

Tianna sailed threw the sky, filled with excitement and joy becuase very soon she would be landing in Montego Bay Airport, she was really overjoyed.

(then Tianna eats visits the beaches, eats lots of wonderful fruit, gets her hair braided perhaps, wakes up in hospital and tells nurse Keeley all about her trip? what u think lol. Try add to this part if you thinks its ok for a base line, we will need to send it to a professional for proper writng)