Website Homepage Copy re-write

Hello,

I trust you are well?

In my attempt to create a deluxe website I feel I rushed my homepage and compared to my competitors I don't feel I adequately sell my self or come across well.

The website is only a year old so there is no way to change the pages but I can change the copy although the layout needs to remain the same and fit into the template space.

I have attached a word document with my current homepage content as well as links to my competitors for you to view and compare. I have also attached a bottle and bespoke image to give you a better idea of what I sell.

I would greatly appreciate your feedback as your portfolio illustrates a clear, creative and practical eloquence while having strong salesman ship which I feel I need.

If you could let me know your interest and estimated final cost it would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you,

Gregor