Editing and rewording of an article written for THIS MONDAY

Kind of writing: Commercial
Num. of words: 980
Industry: Education
Information for the business: We provide telephone training
Topic: ARTICLE FOR MONDAY
Tone: Instructional/Educational
Outline & Structure: I have written an article to be submitted to a website on Monday 17th july. Although I have done it, my grammar isn't great and I tend to repeat many words. I'd like someone to read this and where possible reword it if required, without altering the message. The words can be shortened but not extended.

The audience is companies who help people find work and my article is to give them some strategies.

I'm not convinced the title is right, so if you can think there might be a better one, then submit this to.

This is an URGENT job and needs to be finished by Sunday midnight or Monday 8am the lastest.

To speed up the process I have attached the actual article. Only those who KNOW they can do this and have extensive knowledge in copywriting / grammar need apply.
Extensive research needed: no
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