Copywriter for sky marquees website
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First of all there's quite a few pages where the content could probably be a little better, for example the pages for the StarShade and Chinese Hat Marquees both have the description from the Capri Marquee page which looks like someone has just copied and pasted it:
http://www.skymarquees.co.uk/starshade-marquees/
http://www.skymarquees.co.uk/chinese-hats-marquees/
It's likely to be confusing for customers as the sizes are clearly wrong.
The catering page could probably do with some more content, ideally for SEO purposes you need each page to have around 300 + words for Google to consider it as informative and relevant.
Similarly the About Us page is a good start but might be made better with a few more words for SEO.
- The Blog has never had any posts so I'd recommend that link is removed if you don't have intentions of using it, an empty blog is never a positive reinforcement for customers.
- The Furniture hire page seems to have the images missing of the furniture?
- One of the main things I think is really costing you in leads is the buttons in the Blue bar under the heading "Get Latest Offers and Deals" on clicking the "Subscribe Now" button to enter your email address the pop up says "Free 1 on 1 Consultation" That's likely to deter people from passing on their email address as they wont know what they are signing up for.
The "Request us to Call Back" button brings up a header that says "Prescription For a Great Life" which again I suspect will confuse anyone who clicks on it. The button at the bottom of the form says "Send and Download" - not sure how that relates to requesting a call back?
It sounds like these 2 headings have been left in the template from some sort of medical site that it might have been used for before and just not changed
- On the "Find Us Now, Get Directions" banner the heading "Timings" should be "Opening Times" - again there's quite a few places on the site that I think it's clear they've been written by a non native English speaker and will be putting people off.
Marc G.
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Hi Marc, can you confirm that you'd like all of the copy issues mentioned above addressed and also provide a timescale? So rewriting of pages and work on blog posts? Thanks
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OK, so you've copied and pasted someone's views about the website. We get the general idea, but now we need specifics: what exactly do you want done?
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Hi . I'm guessing this is a list of changes suggested by a third party who has assessed the site and found these faults with it? Is that correct? If so, do you want everything on the list corrected? Thanks, Ann
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Is this a job?
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Can you clarify what you actually need as is a bit confusing. For example you talk of images being missing and I am not sure what that has to do with the brief.