Copy for sign up page

I'm looking for someone to make my bullet list of why someone should join my website better than what I have. The copy should be more salesy, compelling and precise. This is a very small job. I have it done, I just want it better. This could lead to other jobs as I'm growing the site.

Project Details

Type of copywriting: Sales
Length of copy / word count: Short / 200 words
Subject: Help with making my bullet list more precise.
Knowledge of subject: Yes, thorough knowledge is essential
Language(s): English
Language level: Native (first language)