Website content for Building Construction Service

I need to re-write some pages for my building services. This will include a home page which must be re-written in a way to make visitors interested in all my services and make them stay to read more.

These are the pages:
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1. Home http://www.london-builders-pro.co.uk/ the content must be very eye catching as this is our main web page;
2. Home conversion services - http://www.london-builders-pro.co.uk/home-conversion-services.php
3. Home renovation services - http://www.london-builders-pro.co.uk/home-renovation-services.php
4. Commercial services - http://www.london-builders-pro.co.uk/commercial-services.php
5. Structural and engineering service http://www.london-builders-pro.co.uk/structural-engineers.php
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Thank you in advance