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Dragons' Den defence article writing

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  • Proposals: 10
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  • #1240827
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Victoria T.David H.Sumit M.Catherine C.Chris H. + 5 others have already sent a proposal.
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Description

Experience Level: Expert
Information for the blog/website: http://youtu.be/wCUIkH8UP4w
Industry: Business
Topic: article writing for LinkedIn, Facebook, etc
Tone: Witty/Sharp
Outline & Structure: Seeking a low cost exposure for my products in 2013 I accepted a part in Dragons’ Den. Not the wisest decision, but one which has now ingrained my past and I am looking for a way to turn my unfortunate appearance through an article/s telling my side of the story.

http://youtu.be/wCUIkH8UP4w is a link to the video which I have watched once.

An acquaintance of mine made millions out of her positive appearance on DD and I hope YOU can help at least remedy the damage the programme made to my reputation. I have superb products, which today when Facebook talks about AI are even better understood and customers from the Forbes list and recognised public venues.

I get messages like: “Loved your bathomatic idea! Keep up the good work and don't let anyone deter you!” as well as approaches for investment, hence the public does not take me as a complete fool, but telling my story should help. I have already done so to my friends, but Dragons’ Den went nationwide and even global and I need to be able to counter this with your help.

“There is no such thing as bad publicity” will only hold true if you are cleaver enough to turn my public appearance around! Are you that person?

I am open to suggestions.
Extensive research needed: no
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  • Helen P.

    Hi Fredy, would you be willing to take a humorous stance, perhaps 'What I should have said in the Den'? I need to know if you would be comfortable with a piece written from your perspective but with some humility and a little self-deprecation that will cleverly show that actually your product is amazing, you just messed up the picth and the dragons were particularly fierce that day!

    Fredy V.05 Aug 2016

    i made identical posting and am open to proposals

  • Helen P.

    Hi Fredy, I just watched the clip. Ouch! Those were some mean dragons. Duncan was a coward to start out with praise and then follow the herd at the end. I feel for you. The only way I think you can remedy this is by being a bit humble and adding a bunch of humour. Would you be willing to pick apart your own pitch? You could make it a little fun- 'Here are all the things I should have said in the Den'. I need to know how you feel about that approach before I go any further and send a proposal. Good luck with it all either way!

    Fredy V.05 Aug 2016

    Humor is a must! please send your proposal

  • Wizard Proofreading

    Hello Fredy, what sort of word count are you after for the article?