Business Opportunity copywriting

I have a business opportuniy idea for which I am developing a website and process engine which will be ready at the end of June.

My problem is I dont seem to be able to explain the idea in a dynamic way that will make people want to buy.

I want someone who has written text for a business opportunity or has experience with multi level (we are not multilevel) but best describes the type of copy we want, Must have something to show their experience. Please unless you have experience on selling a business opportunity, please do not respond.

Can you help?

Thanks

Mike