Website Content Writen

I am starting a local voucher magazine and need some content written, i have already written most of it, but had it read by someone with alot of marketing experience and said it was all about the company and its aims, and needs to be more about the benefits of advertising with us, its just a introduction for the homepage,a page of text for why to advertise with us and why vouchers work, with i have wrote with needs redoing, plus then from scratch i need a sales letter creating.

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Regards Jason