Music Composing

I have a 2 minute video for a series called "Sexy Mandarin"
The video was cut for the music track but we need better Music.
The director is happy with the video cut but the music needs to be re worked. You will notice at the beginning the hard and fast cuts that hit the beat.
The character then pops up and gives a Mandarin lesson, the change/flow from the hard beats to the the music that will carry out through the lesson needs to fit better and the music should fit better through out the sequence.
This would probably need to be completed within 10 days.