Landing Page and Signup

General information for the website: We are a dry cleaning company - I am looking for a landing page for our new laundry service
Kind of development: Customization of existing website
Num. of web pages/modules: 1
Description of every page/module: I have an existing website: www.idealdrycleaning.co.uk

I am looking to change the landing page http://www.idealdrycleaning.co.uk/dropandgo/ as it is not effective in my opinion.
Description of requirements/features: The new landing page must include the following:

1) Better artwork (current artwork is copied from a flyer)

2) An easy signup offer, giving 5.00 off the first trial order. There must be a sign up / contact form that will be alerted to me by email - it will also send the user a voucher to present in store

3) Better details on locations.
Extra services needed: Optimization
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