Update press release based on feedback

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Attached is a previous press release that I had written for a site that I have built and run (testlodge.com) This press release will be published on a technical blog.

Please only apply for this job if you have an IT related background and understand what online blogs will be looking for.

Based on some feedback that I have received, I would like this updating.

(In relation to point number to, we will go with "TestLodge.com leaves beta, welcomes first 500 paying clients")

1) You will need to include an "About Testlodge" section.
2) The article body seems to be more about the company than news specific to your launch. You might want to highlight the launch as news. e.g. "TestLodge.com launches, welcomes Acme Inc." "TestLodge.com leaves beta, welcomes first 100 clients"
3) SME is lingo you might want to expand it.
4) Missing company funding info. It looks like you're bootstrapping so you might want to indicate that in your about us bio.
5) No press contact.

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