Punchy Youtube ad for book, 30 seconds, mock up available

Hi!
I need to create a punchy, salesy, convincing and converting Youtube ad video for a book.

I have created a quick mock up using Filmora as per the attached file. It is far from perfect, only gives an idea of what kind of content I'm after. If however you have a better idea of how the video should look, then even better! So far the video is 26 secs long so there is a bit of room for the max 30 secs allowed if needed, e.g. adding a still with possible formats, etc.

The purpose of the video is to grab the user's attention and get them to take action -> order. I'm not sure how the call to action i.e. the link works on YT for an ad, so any suggestions are welcomed. From my side there is the option to point to a website or straight to Amazon (once the book is available for pre-orders).

The book will be published on 15th March 2024, however it will be available to pre-order shortly. It will be available as paperback, hardcopy, kindle and audiobook, so the video needs to show this somehow. Initially the book will be only on amazon.co.uk, however in order to make the ad useable elsewhere, let's please use Amazon's logo without the .co.uk.

I do have 2 versions of the voiceover which have been recorded by a professional and will be supplied upon project start. The choice will depend on what fits best the video.

Any questions, please ask.
Regards,
Michael