Website content for 1 page

i have got a single page on my website which is

https://www.nestinessex.co.uk/nest-exclusives/

this page is in regards to a discount card we offer local residents, this discount card will allow you to get discounts at local shops - i need a paragraph for the top of the page to explain the page and purpose of the page - so far i have

Nest in Essex are pleased to announce our launch of the ‘Nest Exclusive Discount Card’ – We have decided to promote local businesses like ourselves and with the rise of social media it is about time that local residents have the option to receive a discount as a reward to shopping local!
Local businesses cannot survive without the support of residents so as a thank you, you can receive a FREE discount card, this card with allow you to make the most of some of the EXCLUSIVE offers currently available from local shops and businesses.
Simple present the card at the point of purchase, save money and support local businesses at the same time!
The discount card is completely free of charge so register for your now!


i need something along these lines but which will be good SEO wise and keyword rich. please could you quote for such wording