Graphic Designer to ad Finish touches to a completed brochure

Our company brochure was recently designed and is finished to a very high standard there are quite a few grammatical errors that need addressing before going to print. because of the 5000 character limit I can not put them all in this description box and the brochure is too big to send over PPH. Due to me advertising previously and getting a lot of time wasters please supply your email address when applying so I can send you the documents all our communication and payments will be on PPH here is a small list of of the errors. there are 16 pages of errors but some of them pages have an error of one spelling mistake on the page. some of the pages have no spelling mistakes but need words deleting and grammatical reading issues. which will take minutes to do.

here are some examples. PAGE 1 — Cover
Current
Professional Cleaning for the Modern Workplace
This is actually a good headline. The cover has a corporate feel rather than looking like a domestic-cleaning leaflet.
I would consider changing the subtitle slightly
You could make the audience clearer:
Professional Cleaning for London Workplaces & Managed Properties
or
Professional Commercial Cleaning Across London
The current phrase “Modern Workplace” makes it sound mainly like an office-cleaning brochure, whereas the brochure also targets property managers, communal developments and other sectors.
This isn't essential. The existing cover is perfectly usable.

PAGE 2 — Contents
There is an immediate spelling mistake:
“End of Tennancy Cleaning”
should be:
“End of Tenancy Cleaning”.
I'd also change:
“Why Choose us”
to:
“Why Choose Us”
And you may want:
“After the Builders Cleaning”
to become the more conventional:
“After Builders Cleaning”
or, better for corporate clients:
“Post-Construction & After Builders Cleaning”
Bigger strategic change
Your contents currently treats every service almost equally.
If this is becoming your commercial outreach brochure, I would reorder it so the most valuable services come first:
About West Clean
Our Team
Office & Commercial Cleaning
Communal & Property Management Cleaning
Healthcare Cleaning
Post-Construction / After Builders Cleaning
End of Tenancy Cleaning
Why Choose West Clean
Client Testimonials
Our Experience
How We Work
Contact
That would match the market you're trying to win.

PAGE 3 — About Us
The opening says:
“Drawing on more than 15 years in professional cleaning services…”
That's good.
But later you say 25 years combined experience. That's not necessarily contradictory, but a reader could wonder which figure is correct.
I'd make the distinction explicit:
“West Clean has more than 15 years' trading experience, supported by over 25 years of combined industry experience across our team.”
That solves the issue.
Current sentence
“We provide a dependable and seamless cleaning service to a diverse portfolio of clients…”
Fine, although I'd tighten it.
Suggested version
West Clean provides dependable professional cleaning services to businesses, property managers, estate agents and organisations across London.
Then:
With more than 15 years' experience, we understand that commercial cleaning is about more than appearance. Reliability, communication, consistency and accountability are equally important.
That's much stronger commercially.
Your present copy becomes quite long and generic.
Testimonial attribution
You have:
“- Lauren Ouno App”
I'd change that to something clearer:
Lauren — Finance & Operations, Ouno App
assuming that is accurate and you have permission.

PAGE 4 — Our Team
This page is fundamentally good.
It currently says:
“Each member is carefully selected, fully trained, and committed to upholding the highest standards…”
Good.
Later:
“we use only premium biodegradable cleaning products.”
Be careful with “only”.
If West Clean ever uses bleach, descaler, specialist chemicals, solvents, disinfectants or another non-biodegradable product when required, the statement becomes inaccurate.
I'd say:
“Where appropriate, we prioritise high-quality, environmentally responsible cleaning products while ensuring the correct products and methods are used for each site.”
More credible.
I would add one commercial sentence
“Our cleaning teams work to documented site specifications, with ongoing supervision and quality checks to help maintain consistent standards.”
That appeals to facilities/property managers.

PAGE 5 — Office & Commercial Cleaning
This is one of your most important pages.
The main copy says:
“Each client is assigned a dedicated account manager and a trusted team of trained cleaners…”
That's strong.
I'd make this page even more B2B-focused.
Add a small section such as:
Suitable for:
• Offices
• Managed properties
• Professional practices
• Shared workspaces
• Retail and commercial premises
• Property-management portfolios