C.V. update

It's that time again, I'm looking for another job and need my CV updating.
Can you change the wording on my job at Hop
Sales Executive (Full Cycle)
Hop Software, January 2020 – October 2020
Working for this hospitality and digital marketing agency, I built fantastic relationships with each customer using my consultative sales technique. I generated my own leads through cold calling,
marketing, and social media. I then demonstrated the Hop platform by screen share or face-to-face. I then discussed their marketing needs to secure a sale.
My Current role
Sales Development Representative
Regiondo GmbH, April 2022 - Present
Working at this tour and activity booking platform, I manage a pipeline of leads and book demos for the Sales Managers. From making the initial contact, my aim is to build rapport with prospects to understand their challenges and provide solutions. I also manage Salesforce, attend training sessions, and liaise with the Sales Managers to help close the sales.
Could I have this as soon as possible please.
Best regards
Debbie