Business plan and financial projection review

General information for the business: Romford MakerSpace is a collaborative digital fabrication workspace based in Romford, Essex. We are seeking funding through the local authority and other funding agencies.
Industry: Business
Target audience: Funding agencies and investors
Research needed: yes
Chapters needed: Review of the business plan, and financial forecast
Information to be included in each chapter: We have currently put together a business plan, and financial forecast. However we do not have any experience with business plans and financial forecasts for companies who are seeking funding from the public sector and grant awarding agencies.
Therefore we looking for a review of the documents we have produced, and comments and suggestions on what needs to be improved/removed/added etc.
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