5 Year financial forecast for our Start up that will EXCITE investors

General information for the business: We are the Airbnb of Storage helping households rent out their extra space to people who need cheap storage
Industry: Technology
Target audience: Investors
Chapters needed: Exec summary and main body of financial forecasts
Extra notes: I am the founder of storemates.co.uk a peer to peer online service where households can rent out’ their extra space to people locally looking for cheap storage.

We are currently trying to raise investment by crowd funding via seedrs.com You can check out our profile here/see quick film. https://www.seedrs.com/storemates

To our surprise people have been slow to invest even though we have had a lot of people interested and a great product.We've just gathered feedback on why, and found out that our financial forecasts make no sense, they are too complex to understand, have glaring flaws are based in incorrect assumptions, plus they completely fail in show casing our revenue potential and justifying valuation. (produced for us by a friend of a friend)

We therefore need to completely redo them, and make them clear and easy to understand, comprehensive without appearing complex and with a revenue potential based on revised assumption of multiple income streams and super growth.

We also need them ready in a couple of days (by Friday), with a summary that we can use in our business plan and investment deck.
Attached are the existing financials, plus a brief of what we want the new ones to reflect.
Our key mistake is that previous figures assumed most storage contracts were only 3 months when in effect they average 2 years therefore generating much income.
Please use the brief to help you formulate the new forecast.
PS only respond to this job if you can absolutely interested as I have just been let down by someone who took on the job and then decided not to go forward so very anxious hiring the right person.
Needs to fully completed by Thurs Evening