Phoenix - Your AI AssistantReview & Fix Your Press Release
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What you get with this Offer
Have you written a press release but you're not sure if it's good enough to send to journalists?
Most press releases never get coverage because they are too long, not newsworthy, poorly structured or written in a way that journalists immediately ignore.
Before you start sending it out, it’s worth having an experienced journalist take a look.
I’m an award-winning journalist, copywriter, editor and PR agency founder with 15+ years of experience securing media coverage across national newspapers, major international titles, consumer magazines and industry publications (UK, USA, UAE, Australia +++).
I also hold a First Class MA in Online Journalism and have been named PeoplePerHour’s Business Whisperer, with thousands of five star reviews on this platform. I've worked with brands like BBC Good Food, Indeed, Yell, Lloyds Bank, Majestic Wine, DoubleTree by Hilton, Neutrogena, Listerine and many more.
In this package, I’ll review your press release and improve it so it has a much better chance of getting opened and read by journalists. I will:
• Improve the headline so it grabs attention
• Strengthen the news angle and hook
• Edit and tighten the copy for clarity and impact
• Improve structure so it follows proper media format
• Remove promotional language journalists dislike
• Ensure it reads professionally and journalist-friendly
Where necessary, I will rewrite sections to make the story stronger and clearer.
What you will receive from me:
• Your edited and improved press release
• Tracked changes or clearly marked improvements
• Additional comments or suggestions where helpful
Why is this a smart investment?
Journalists receive hundreds of press releases every week. Small improvements to the headline, angle and structure can make the difference between being ignored and being read.
Ideal for:
• Startups launching a new product or service
• Small businesses trying to get media coverage
• Founders doing their own PR
• Anyone who has written a press release but wants expert feedback before sending it
If you want a press release that journalists will actually take seriously, this review can help make sure you're sending something worth reading.
Most press releases never get coverage because they are too long, not newsworthy, poorly structured or written in a way that journalists immediately ignore.
Before you start sending it out, it’s worth having an experienced journalist take a look.
I’m an award-winning journalist, copywriter, editor and PR agency founder with 15+ years of experience securing media coverage across national newspapers, major international titles, consumer magazines and industry publications (UK, USA, UAE, Australia +++).
I also hold a First Class MA in Online Journalism and have been named PeoplePerHour’s Business Whisperer, with thousands of five star reviews on this platform. I've worked with brands like BBC Good Food, Indeed, Yell, Lloyds Bank, Majestic Wine, DoubleTree by Hilton, Neutrogena, Listerine and many more.
In this package, I’ll review your press release and improve it so it has a much better chance of getting opened and read by journalists. I will:
• Improve the headline so it grabs attention
• Strengthen the news angle and hook
• Edit and tighten the copy for clarity and impact
• Improve structure so it follows proper media format
• Remove promotional language journalists dislike
• Ensure it reads professionally and journalist-friendly
Where necessary, I will rewrite sections to make the story stronger and clearer.
What you will receive from me:
• Your edited and improved press release
• Tracked changes or clearly marked improvements
• Additional comments or suggestions where helpful
Why is this a smart investment?
Journalists receive hundreds of press releases every week. Small improvements to the headline, angle and structure can make the difference between being ignored and being read.
Ideal for:
• Startups launching a new product or service
• Small businesses trying to get media coverage
• Founders doing their own PR
• Anyone who has written a press release but wants expert feedback before sending it
If you want a press release that journalists will actually take seriously, this review can help make sure you're sending something worth reading.
What the Freelancer needs to start the work
Please provide your prepared press release as an editable Word doc or Google Doc.