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What you get with this Offer
Is your script's opening strong enough to grab readers, agents, or producers in the first 5 pages?
As a freelance screenwriter, Film Freeway film reviewer/rater for New York Cinefest and North Hollywood Cinefest, and winner of Best Drama Screenplay at the 8 & Halfilm Festival, I provide sharp, constructive professional feedback that goes beyond surface-level notes.
I will review your first 5 screenplay pages, and provide three structured paragraphs of narrative feedback (1 page), covering:
• Hook and pacing
• Dialogue flow and character voice
• Scene clarity and emotional tone
Delivered as a written PDF summary.
This offer is ideal if you're preparing for:
• Script competitions
• Production submissions
• Studio reviews or funding applications
With the add on, and using script software, you can add me as a temporary collaborator on WriterDuet, Final Draft, or Celtx.
No software? I’ll upload your script to WriterDuet, add in-line comments, and return a commented PDF or FDX file (available only with the add-on).
If you’re ready for professional feedback that’s honest, actionable, and story-driven, check my verified feedback and place your order now.
Credentials:
Best Drama Screenplay Winner – Duality: 8 & Halfilm Festival, Rome
Best Film Award Short: The Night of Halloween
Selected Short: Separation
Film Reviewer – NY & North Hollywood Cinefest, Urbanite Film Festival
Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
As a freelance screenwriter, Film Freeway film reviewer/rater for New York Cinefest and North Hollywood Cinefest, and winner of Best Drama Screenplay at the 8 & Halfilm Festival, I provide sharp, constructive professional feedback that goes beyond surface-level notes.
I will review your first 5 screenplay pages, and provide three structured paragraphs of narrative feedback (1 page), covering:
• Hook and pacing
• Dialogue flow and character voice
• Scene clarity and emotional tone
Delivered as a written PDF summary.
This offer is ideal if you're preparing for:
• Script competitions
• Production submissions
• Studio reviews or funding applications
With the add on, and using script software, you can add me as a temporary collaborator on WriterDuet, Final Draft, or Celtx.
No software? I’ll upload your script to WriterDuet, add in-line comments, and return a commented PDF or FDX file (available only with the add-on).
If you’re ready for professional feedback that’s honest, actionable, and story-driven, check my verified feedback and place your order now.
Credentials:
Best Drama Screenplay Winner – Duality: 8 & Halfilm Festival, Rome
Best Film Award Short: The Night of Halloween
Selected Short: Separation
Film Reviewer – NY & North Hollywood Cinefest, Urbanite Film Festival
Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.
What the Freelancer needs to start the work
I need your first 5 screenplay pages upon booking this offer. Plus any extras you want added at the same time. If you choose a technical cleanup of your script, this is not story-focused, this is to elevate style and technique.