Phoenix - Your AI AssistantCarry out a structual review of your manuscript
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What you get with this Offer
For over a decade, I’ve specialised in providing clear, insightful, and practical editorial feedback that helps authors elevate their manuscripts with confidence. My approach blends deep structural understanding with a sensitivity to each writer’s unique voice, ensuring your story becomes stronger without ever losing its identity.
This service provides a full Quarter System structural analysis (Daniel David Wallace / Shawn Coyne hybrid). You’ll receive a detailed report covering setup, conflict, midpoint, crisis, and resolution, along with pacing, stakes, character arcs, and genre conventions. Ideal for authors who want a clear, actionable blueprint before revising.
I will provide a detailed report covering the four Quarter System breakdowns, and a clear summary highlighting strengths, gaps, and next‑step revisions. The offer covers up to 45000 words.
This is not a development edit, just the first phase of an early draft of your manuscript. Please contact me if you have any questions before booking, and I cover most genres, except horror or biographical works.
Delivery will take around 4 days from booking: Monday-Friday.
This service provides a full Quarter System structural analysis (Daniel David Wallace / Shawn Coyne hybrid). You’ll receive a detailed report covering setup, conflict, midpoint, crisis, and resolution, along with pacing, stakes, character arcs, and genre conventions. Ideal for authors who want a clear, actionable blueprint before revising.
I will provide a detailed report covering the four Quarter System breakdowns, and a clear summary highlighting strengths, gaps, and next‑step revisions. The offer covers up to 45000 words.
This is not a development edit, just the first phase of an early draft of your manuscript. Please contact me if you have any questions before booking, and I cover most genres, except horror or biographical works.
Delivery will take around 4 days from booking: Monday-Friday.
What the Freelancer needs to start the work
I need your full early draft (up to 45,000 words) in Word or Google Docs, along with your genre and intended audience. It would be helpful to understand any specific concerns you already have (pacing, character arcs, plot clarity, structure, etc.) Also, a brief sentence about your story’s core premise would be useful.
If there are any non‑negotiables you want preserved (tone, themes, character voice), please include these.