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Insights
Insights
by Alex K.
- Posted: 17 Jun 2021
by Jo W.
- Posted: 9 Apr 2021
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Jo W.
Leeds, GBThere were so many mistakes, and I am still fixing them.
I had written - glancing back at the apartment I leave.
She edited it to - I turn back to look at the apartment. I’m leaving.
I wrote - His words laced with venom, nodding I
She edited to - His words laced with venom and, nodding.
Words were added without consideration for the words that came after, leaving sentences unreadable.
It sounded like a child in some places. For instance:
I wrote - My hand opens it
She edited it to - I open it.
I ended up with soo many 2-3 word sentences that made the book sound chopped up. The idea was the proofread it, not try to edit the book.Karen C.
Such a shame to read. I did say I'd corrected the grammar and edited it as well, especially the awkward sentences and repetition of sentence starters. I would have happily reverted to your original sentence structure had you mentioned it. There are no mistakes in my grammar, simply improved structure and flow. My sincere regrets at reading this.
by Alex K.
- Posted: 22 Mar 2021
by Amre H.
- Posted: 27 Oct 2020
by Adam T.
- Posted: 25 Sep 2020
by Des O.
- Posted: 11 Apr 2020