Translation

Hi,

I have two Chinese translations that I need translating and your personal opinion on wether they are good translations.

I will therefore send you the english and the two Chinese translations I have. This is a test we asked to people to sit to ensure their translation skills were up to scratch. Red being one candidate and the blue being the second.

Would you be able to take a look at the attached document and advise if they are both good translations and where the errors may be.

Thanks

Adam