Tweak a small amount of text

Num. of words: 450
Industry: Lifestyle/Travel
Topic: wedding ring making workshops
Tone: Sincere
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes: Num. of words: 450
Industry: Lifestyle/Travel
Topic: make your own wedding ring workshops
Tone: Sincere
Extensive research needed: no
Extra notes: HI I have a small amount of text which is to be used for listing my business on a well known and very nice wedding blog -" little book for brides." on Love my dress
I have written a basic draft but just looking for someone to look over it and improve it where required, keeping in theme with the style of the wedding blog website. ( but not too mushy or cheesy!)
I have attached my draft which has links to my website and the listings the for examples.
I am going to be working on editing the images today and I am hoping to upload it all this evening.
any questions please ask and look forward to hearing from you