Editing and proof reading required

I have a 6 page document for an online product I am producing - however my grammar isn't great and I am concerned that I could have put commas and full stops in the wrong page. Also "speech marks" not sure where they should finish or end. Or in fact am I better excluding them. What the speech marks showing on column 1. But could they be excluded for column 2 - even though its a 'phrase' to be said. I've attached one page of the 6 page document so you can get a better idea of what the job involves.

I am looking for someone with EXCELLENT English to read through it ensuring everything is correct regarding grammar.

This is needed within 24-36 hours.