A short film script analysis with possible ghost writing/editing

I need a female ghost script writer, with a lot of experience to read and feed back a short film I have written (around 30 pages). I need an analysis of structure, dialogue, character, clarity and pace. I have re-written many times, so may need help with the actual writing in some places, but primarily it is to do an analysis. If I need further help it will be a separate contract.
The film is based on real events and is about sexual assault and the aftermath of the assault including the stages of trauma. Although hard to watch, I have been careful not to make it all painful, as that is not how trauma works and would be an insult to survivors. It is set in London. I am looking for someone who understands young Londoners.