We need help writing the script for our new ad

Hi

I'm Joe and I'm the managing director of My First Single - The Online Recording Studio.

We're about to rebrand to just be called The Online Recording Studio and we want to update our current ad. We'd like to include a voiceover on the new one as it will be shown on facebook and youtube.

Our old ad can be found here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UyOAz8Sp1QE

We've put together a rough draft of what the new ad will look like but would love your assistance on putting together the voiceover script.

It would be great to speak to you properly about what we're after.

Let me know if this is something that would be of interest to you.

Thanks

Joe