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I need help drafting a letter for my uni appeal. please find DOCUMENTED LETTER of the overview of my situation in word document attachment, which should provide some background to my situation.
In this letter I would like to express:
• The state of my mind
• the main reason it occurred
• why I didn’t get help
the uni wants me to explain why I didn't summit mitigation prior to sitting my exam ( mainly because at the time I honestly didn’t know this was affected me as I managed to cope with it previously and i was under stress which i was unaware of) To my defence I tried my best and fully prepared myself to sit the exam even going through the difficult times
I want to express that i was in a bad state of mind to the extent that I wasn't able to make a rational decision of mitigation at this time. I want to say that i was mentally disturbed to the point where i couldn't think clearly of making the right choice. Please help me to express this burden i had that had made me lose my conscious awareness of thinking to seek mitigation for my exams.
I really need to focus my letter on describe why i wasn't able to think rationally at the time of my difficulties. i was highly stressed, including lack of concentration, lack of sleep and tiredness but I cant find the words to express the stress and pressure i was mentally in at the time so please help me describe this.
i was really occupied helping my father and highly stressed and at the time and doing this thing of mitigation procedure was really low priority and to be honest it never really crossed my mind to point where it was significant to make a difference.
To my defence I tried my best and fully prepared myself to sit the exam even in going through the difficult times i was quite confident that I would pass but days to the exam my father was behaving stranger which impaired my concentration and i may have be distracted by this.
I managed to cope with my father illness very well in my previous year and didn’t have any problems passing through to my final year. I didn’t know that this was effecting me at the time hence i woud off told the university
As a result i fell ill in the process and that added more difficult as i wasn't concentrating on my health which made things worse.
the main reason for this is because i was going to difficult time helping my father cope with his mental illness. the stress had left me difficult state. there was times i was really upset and i found it hard to concentrate and starred to forget to eat anf focus keeping in touch... and had to be strong for the family and brave face never showing how upset i was inside becoz i wanted to see my family to be happy.
I had no control of this situation.I experienced exceptional disruption to my personal life of a nature which nobody would normally be expected to encounter which was my father illness getting worse.
It was a shocking and mostly disturbing atmosphere to see my father is such a negative state, which greatly impact on me
Suddenly my father’s illness starting getting worse about three weeks before my exam date and continued on during my examination period. My father started to experience psychotic episodes he was suddenly started saying strange and worrying things and his depression started to get worse. My father attempt suicide several time before so during this period I was extremely worried as losing my fathe.I had to spend hours explaining to my dad that things will improve and even after reassuring him several times it seemed like minutes later the things I said never really registered. It was really frustrating for me but Every day was challenging dealing with the stress
It was hard to see tears in my dads eyes and to this day I still hoping to hear him laugh. I still cant forget the mornings when my father would get up suddenly get up in a fright and he would be extreme sweating in relation to fear......
My brain was in autopilot for so long during this time, being so discipline and dutiful to my family needs, and i was determined to complete my revision, that I had temporarily put aside this kind of conscious awareness of thinking to seek mitigation for my exams. My main priority was to support my father in any way possible and never thought that it would affect me mentally and would something my chances for becoming a pharmacist
Kindest Regards
In this letter I would like to express:
• The state of my mind
• the main reason it occurred
• why I didn’t get help
the uni wants me to explain why I didn't summit mitigation prior to sitting my exam ( mainly because at the time I honestly didn’t know this was affected me as I managed to cope with it previously and i was under stress which i was unaware of) To my defence I tried my best and fully prepared myself to sit the exam even going through the difficult times
I want to express that i was in a bad state of mind to the extent that I wasn't able to make a rational decision of mitigation at this time. I want to say that i was mentally disturbed to the point where i couldn't think clearly of making the right choice. Please help me to express this burden i had that had made me lose my conscious awareness of thinking to seek mitigation for my exams.
I really need to focus my letter on describe why i wasn't able to think rationally at the time of my difficulties. i was highly stressed, including lack of concentration, lack of sleep and tiredness but I cant find the words to express the stress and pressure i was mentally in at the time so please help me describe this.
i was really occupied helping my father and highly stressed and at the time and doing this thing of mitigation procedure was really low priority and to be honest it never really crossed my mind to point where it was significant to make a difference.
To my defence I tried my best and fully prepared myself to sit the exam even in going through the difficult times i was quite confident that I would pass but days to the exam my father was behaving stranger which impaired my concentration and i may have be distracted by this.
I managed to cope with my father illness very well in my previous year and didn’t have any problems passing through to my final year. I didn’t know that this was effecting me at the time hence i woud off told the university
As a result i fell ill in the process and that added more difficult as i wasn't concentrating on my health which made things worse.
the main reason for this is because i was going to difficult time helping my father cope with his mental illness. the stress had left me difficult state. there was times i was really upset and i found it hard to concentrate and starred to forget to eat anf focus keeping in touch... and had to be strong for the family and brave face never showing how upset i was inside becoz i wanted to see my family to be happy.
I had no control of this situation.I experienced exceptional disruption to my personal life of a nature which nobody would normally be expected to encounter which was my father illness getting worse.
It was a shocking and mostly disturbing atmosphere to see my father is such a negative state, which greatly impact on me
Suddenly my father’s illness starting getting worse about three weeks before my exam date and continued on during my examination period. My father started to experience psychotic episodes he was suddenly started saying strange and worrying things and his depression started to get worse. My father attempt suicide several time before so during this period I was extremely worried as losing my fathe.I had to spend hours explaining to my dad that things will improve and even after reassuring him several times it seemed like minutes later the things I said never really registered. It was really frustrating for me but Every day was challenging dealing with the stress
It was hard to see tears in my dads eyes and to this day I still hoping to hear him laugh. I still cant forget the mornings when my father would get up suddenly get up in a fright and he would be extreme sweating in relation to fear......
My brain was in autopilot for so long during this time, being so discipline and dutiful to my family needs, and i was determined to complete my revision, that I had temporarily put aside this kind of conscious awareness of thinking to seek mitigation for my exams. My main priority was to support my father in any way possible and never thought that it would affect me mentally and would something my chances for becoming a pharmacist
Kindest Regards
Elvis R.
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